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The Golden Lion

annajackson - 07 Jul 07 - 5:26 PM

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I am thoroughly enjoying your storyline.  OC characters and romances tend to give me hives because the OC's sprout mysterious powers even the Maiar don't have and the romance proceeds straight to smut.  [Don't get me wrong, lust is great, it's just nice to see some emotion develop first]  Meren is quite believable and her 'gift' actually fits in quite logically.  Smile Perfect amount of angst for one who has loved from afar.

GAH!! I hit chapter 9 and I'm hanging by my collar from a mallorn tree.  Please update soon, I want to see where this plotbaby wanders Laugh out loud

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The Golden Lion

Gilnaur - 07 Jul 07 - 6:06 PM

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Thankyou AnneJackson, what a nice comment! Glad it caught your attention and you are hoping for more soon. I do try to make my characters believable and their actions appropriate even if the story line isn't canon. I love Tolkien's world!

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