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Strange Stars

Maeve Riannon - 25 May 07 - 1:40 PM

Ch. 11: As Boundless As the Sea

Hey, congratulations for this magnificent story!

 I must confess I just began to read this because I wanted to know what all the ruckus was about. Then, I was blown away by your characterisations, the skilled introspection and the comings and goings of the plot, and I devoured all 12 chapters at once (and I´m supposed NOT to have time for those things! Rolling my eyes)

But above all, what I enjoyed (and applauded) the most was how you effectively disarmed, twisted and killed ALL the clichés that annoy me the most in a single story. I don´t even know how to begin, if with those evil Southrons, or the helpless, virginal Legolas (with evil rapist included! ^_^), or the Irredeemable Villain Who Directs The Audience´s Most Base Impulses (TM)...

Brilliant. Non-clichéd fiction CAN be done, after all!

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Strange Stars

ziggy - 28 Dec 08 - 11:34 AM

Ch. 11: As Boundless As the Sea

This last line is one of the most beautiful moments in this beautiful story. You write with such tenderness for your characters, all of them. As Legolas gives them each a gift, they have also given him such understanding that he articulates to Khorlai. Wonderful 

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