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Coda
DKP - 18 May 07 - 11:56 AM
I still love the symbolism and subtle backstory that you've woven into this, reaching across two Ages to another terrible downfall, also catalyzed by folly and pride. Wonderful!
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erunyauve - 22 May 07 - 11:41 AM
>>May this gift be guide, reminder and warning.
I think it's difficult to 'show' rather than 'tell' in the cramped format of the drabble, but you do this quite effectively. This is really more like a picture snapped at just the right moment - the sort that become symbolic of a whole event.
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Elena Tiriel - 11 Jul 12 - 5:43 PM
This drabble is stunningly vivid in its imagery, and its warning about the pitfalls of pride is haunting. History does indeed repeat itself.
Incredibly beautiful, Imhiriel!
- Barbara
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