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Lothiriel's Journal

whitewave - 26 Apr 08 - 10:11 AM

Ch. 1: Prologue

I have read your stories and I like the "ambience" everytime.  It's so easy to get immersed in the world you paint. 

For this chapter, I particularly liked the smart dialogue between Eothain and Eomer.  I liked how you fleshed out Eomer's character - who I felt was so under exposed in the books.

My favorite scene here was the part where Eomer mistakes Lothiriel for another woman and how he reacts to it. 

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