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With Hope and Without Hope

thelauderdale - 20 Jul 08 - 8:22 AM

Ch. 11: Travel

OMG!  Chapter 11, that part with the Nazgul was...awesome!  They're so evil, so terrifying. but singleminded to the point of laughability.  That's not a criticism of your writing, I think you did it beautifully. But it was still pretty amazing.

Nazgul:  You.  Where's Aragorn?

Gimli: Back that way.

Nazgul: [whoosh]

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With Hope and Without Hope

docmon - 20 Jul 08 - 2:06 PM

Ch. 11: Travel

LOL so glad you enjoyed that scene. I like your summary of the situation, although his motivation for the sudden departure was slightly different. Whatever works for ya! Wink

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