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Dance of the Deer and Mûmak

Authiel - 10 Feb 10 - 9:39 PM

General Comment

I really enjoyed this. The humor was great, but the imagery really won me over. The squirrel comment must have also contributed, no doubt.

Honestly, upon the first reading, I imagined Gimli doing the Time Warp from "The Rocky Horror Picture Show." Laugh out loud I guess that I'll never get that image out of my head now. ^^;;

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Dance of the Deer and Mûmak

Sylvia - 17 Sep 09 - 12:58 PM

Ch. 1: Dance of the Deer and Mûmak

This was really cool!  It was great to see Gimli having to mingle with the other elves and dancing with them.

"Only a miracle keeps those squirrels from smashing into one another!"

LOL that was such a funny image.  Compare the elves to squirrels and its hilariously fitting.  I'm interested to see what series this is part of so I can read what led up to this chapter.  Guess I'll go hunt down more of your stories.

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