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The Witch King

Aganaphel - 02 Nov 07 - 9:10 AM

Ch. 1: The Witch King

Loved the poem. A great interpretation of the WK's threat: "I will bear thee away..."

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Armariel - 03 Nov 07 - 9:14 PM

Ch. 1: The Witch King

Thanks Aganaphel!  I scared myself writing this one....didn't know I had it in me...lol

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Lorendiac - 14 Feb 08 - 8:15 PM

Ch. 1: The Witch King

You weren't kidding about "not for the faint of heart." You certainly captured the arrogant tone I would expect in any poetic musings of the title character. However, I feel obligated to throw in an obligatory nitpick: The first word of the first line should be "indestructible" instead of "indestructable." I checked an online dictionary just now, and it agrees with me.

(Frankly, before I did check, I wasn't 100 percent sure what it would say -- it was always possible that both spellings were valid -- but no, as I thought, it's always supposed to end "-ible" for some reason. Please don't ask me why!)

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Armariel - 13 Sep 09 - 12:46 PM

Ch. 1: The Witch King

Thanks Lorendiac!  I don't think I saw this comment before--just now noticed it!  

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