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On the Wings of the Storm

Finnoula - 08 Oct 08 - 6:30 PM

Ch. 19: Chapter 19

Goodness, I love the tension you build when you write! Every technical aspect of this story is on point, and I especially enjoy Lothíriel's internal dialogue. THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL. THANK YOU FOR SHARING! All hail Lialathuveril :)

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On the Wings of the Storm

Lialathuveril - 09 Oct 08 - 12:10 PM

Ch. 19: Chapter 19

Hello Perstephone,
thank you! I have found that the first person viewpoint really helps me get inside Lothiriel's mind.

And in a way the tension is intensified by the troubled times they live in. And the fact that they never have enough time to talk!

Thank you for your comment!


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