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On the Wings of the Storm
Finnoula - 08 Oct 08 - 6:30 PM
Goodness, I love the tension you build when you write! Every technical aspect of this story is on point, and I especially enjoy Lothíriel's internal dialogue. THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL. THANK YOU FOR SHARING! All hail Lialathuveril :)
On the Wings of the Storm
Lialathuveril - 09 Oct 08 - 12:10 PM
Hello Perstephone,
thank you! I have found that the first person viewpoint really helps me get inside Lothiriel's mind.
And in a way the tension is intensified by the troubled times they live in. And the fact that they never have enough time to talk!
Thank you for your comment!
Lia
