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On the Wings of the Storm

LdyElf23 - 13 Nov 08 - 11:15 PM

Ch. 22: Chapter 22

Gah! Another cliffhanger!

Great chapter as usual. Again I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter! I think the whole bare feet thing is cute, and I can just picture Lithiriel atop her horse looking like a little wafe. 

Keep up the great prose!

LdyElf23  Cool

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On the Wings of the Storm

Lialathuveril - 14 Nov 08 - 12:18 PM

Ch. 22: Chapter 22

Hello LdyElf23,
you didn't expect a not-cliffhanger from me, did you? And I'm afraid it will only get worse in the next chapter.

But we'll see if the bedraggled look appeals to Eomer Wink

Thanks for reviewing!


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