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Sacrifice

Michelle - 17 Dec 08 - 12:39 PM

Ch. 2: Restoration

Oh, this is twisted! I like how you focus solely on this moment in time, and give us no further info about either the setting or the characters, Yes, I can deduce much about the situation from your hints, but you leave a lot in shadow and as a reader I enjoy when I'm allowed to fill in the blanks. 

My favourite sentence was this one: "And so he follows me to this dark place in my heart." It's the kind of sentence that sweeps you off your feet and leaves you awestruck:)

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