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Elen Kortirion - 10 Oct 08 - 4:25 AM
But of course! You've brought up a perfectly logical idea that I've never seen mentioned before. Wonderful! Absolutely logical, completely original (as far as I know). I thoroughly enjoyed your writing and descriptions, they conveyed the scene with great clarity... and the concept behind the story is a terrific 'face palm' moment as in 'but of course, someone had to do that!!'
Well done for bringing forward something truly fresh and novel. :-)
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Aiwendiel - 10 Oct 08 - 11:28 AM
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Tanis - 16 Jul 12 - 6:04 PM
So having found one I thoroughly enjoyed, I had to go looking for others. I don't do WIPs anymore and anything over 5k requires a time commitment I rarely have these days ... but these short ones I have time and leisure to peruse.
This was so very different! Which made it both compelling and fun to read. Though fun is probably not an adjective that best describes this stoy. Your descriptions of the Pelennor are so good I almost felt as though I was walking in their wake as Aragorn and Gandalf trod that noisome path.
Aragorn's descrying of Éowyn & Merry's battle with the Nazgul, just from their footprints, raised a bit of professional jealousy - that was exquisite. But then you gave us Aragorn in temptation mode and Gandalf being ... Gandalf. The turning point of that decision was honed like a diamond.
Great read! This one's going in my favorite's folder.
tanis
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RiverOtter - 10 Oct 08 - 6:07 AM
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Iva1201 - 12 Jun 10 - 5:04 AM
Excellent piece - something that has never occured to me to be missing but is very fitting. And excellently written on the top of it - although, I have not expected anything less knowing and loving your A Bit of Rope. (-:
Iva
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