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The Kindness of Strangers

thelauderdale - 30 May 11 - 12:05 PM

Ch. 12: And Need of Vittles

Oh dear, Muzlúk and pals. [shakes her head] This isn't an Orc story, but you have vividly conjured up their viciousness and their vulgarity, even in their absence.  ESPECIALLY in their absence, with the images of their handiwork left behind them.

On the subject of ravens again, I like how Coräc's avian intelligence limits his counting abilities, but how his personal intelligence navigates this shortcoming, using the moon to communicate the passage of time to Gandalf.  And of course, Morigian is impressive.  It's good that Coräc has her to wife, or he might well be impossible.

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