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Hand to Hand

Elrûn - 26 May 09 - 6:19 AM

Ch. 15: Sitting Idly By

Adaneth,

To see Veylin so moved, uncertain even, is unsettling indeed. Nor do the news concerning Dírmaen serve to calm my nerves. I just hope that men and dwarves will not become estranged after all that has happened...

Elrûn

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mffantasia - 26 May 09 - 8:54 AM

Ch. 15: Sitting Idly By

Adaneth,

You will think that after such a  tragic event, people will get closer, but it seems that the differeces between races are creating a greater gulf than bridges. I hope that they can resolve all this and preserve their alliance. Good for her trying to send news to the elves, and to attend the rangers. God, can you give us  real news about Dirmaen? the only that I know is that he is alive and ready to die...

Thank you

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Adaneth - 26 May 09 - 10:45 AM

Ch. 15: Sitting Idly By

Thanks for the comments, Elrûn and Fantasia!

God, can you give us  real news about Dirmaen? the only that I know is that he is alive and ready to die...

Oh ye of little faith . . . .  Surely you don't think Saelon dislikes him so much she'd let her reputation suffer by losing a patient?  Wink

I just hope that men and dwarves will not become estranged after all that has happened...

Everyone's had a very upsetting couple of days, and are not themselves . . . or are too much themselves.  Shall we find out which?

Cheers--

Adaneth

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DKP - 05 Jun 09 - 7:25 PM

Ch. 15: Sitting Idly By

Ach, Veylin! That's what happens when a person who is used to staying busy ends up idle for too long. Such worries and stresses - I understand whereof they grow, but hopefully he will take time later to reflect on how close the timing was. Had the Rangers (read: Dírmaen) not driven themselves over the mountains with such ferocity, the Dwarves would have arrived first and been very much needed.

...she sounded eerily like a Dwarf as she upbraided Nyr for shoddy workmanship...

I've come out of this with a far deeper respect for Fransag.

Such a contrast: Auð's insights gained from a child of normalcy, Veylin seeing Men in a time far from normal. You do such an amazing job of stepping into the Dwarven perspective to show how odd certain behaviors look, which Men read as natural. It was utterly fascinating to watch through Veylin's perspective; and his wish to help, if only he knew how, very touching. Goodness, I like him.

Dírmaen.

Hee! I admit, I had forgotten the depth of enmity on both parts.

...and are not themselves . . . or are too much themselves.  Shall we find out which?

Yes, please!!

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