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Hand to Hand

DKP - 12 Mar 10 - 4:59 PM

Ch. 23: Ensnaring Women

Late is better than never, yes? Erg...

What a superb job you do, revealing Dírmaen's tortured mind to us. And all the lovely details I so adore, like as Dírmaen arranged his cloak so the wet would stream away from their seat, to name only one of many - never too much, but crafting a complete picture in my mind and totally realistic.

And awwww... the connection between Mada and Dírmaen brought a smile to my own face.

...his grandmother had captained the defense of Gellnen against a band that ravaged the North Downs while the men battled the larger horde near Fornost. Heh! I'd like to see his and Saelon's grandmothers meet. *g*

Love Dírmaen's inner thoughts as he and Randir converse. And Randir's confession: yay! I confess I myself was rather hoping for that, incurable romantic that I am.

Randir gave him a long-suffering look.  "So you must eschew open battle . . . yet what is new in that?  You are a Ranger, are you not?" Brilliant, Randir - just the sort of counsel Dírmaen needs in order to get his head on straight!

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