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Deeper than Breathing

curiouswombat - 16 May 09 - 3:24 PM

Ch. 12: Chapter 12 Pippin

Ah - firstly thanks for the shout-out.

Secondly - I have taken your advice and have been over to the Pit of Voles and read to the end - and it is a perfect ending point - if you are not going to post the rest of it here I shall have to bookmark it over there.

Thirdly - as it is finished, why not just post the rest of it a chapter a day here, simply so that it is marked off as 'complete', and no-one gets almost all the way through in the future and then finds it abandoned - even though the end is written?

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