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Watching from afar

curiouswombat - 27 Jun 09 - 9:12 AM

Ch. 1: Watching from afar

What a beautiful interpretation of that line from the Tale, and of your theme and element - bravo!

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Watching from afar

Larner - 06 Dec 09 - 11:07 AM

Ch. 1: Watching from afar

Oh, how perfect, Nath!  And her watching over him is so blessed!  Truly a worthy tale for the challenge!

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Watching from afar

Julie - 30 Dec 09 - 2:55 PM

Ch. 1: Watching from afar

This is well done, and a good gapfill for what "she watched over him in thought", probably would mean. Her "he has to be well" is doubly poignant, coming here after reading parts of your dark AU (Unto the Ending of the World).

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