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A Ring of Nine Watchers

Tanis - 16 Jul 12 - 5:32 PM

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Fair's fair and since you took time to read mine, I had to come find something to return the favor. 

These little insightful pieces are wonderful!  Each with a perfect voice of the character observing - I could hear each one of them.  The cadences of speech patterns, the choice of words, even the things about the one under observation that catch the observers attention - all speak loudly in the characters voice. 

Beautifully wrought!

Tanis

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