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Not Wholly Fruitless

illereyn - 03 Jan 10 - 1:34 PM

Ch. 5: In Remembrance of the Lost

Good story, you showed the different attitudes and motivations very well!  Don't understand the connection between the two chapters, but I guess that becomes apparent later?

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Not Wholly Fruitless

maeglin - 03 Jan 10 - 2:06 PM

Ch. 5: In Remembrance of the Lost

Thanks, illereyn!  At the moment, there's not a lot of connection, because the current two chapters are set about 6000 years apart.  There is a lot to tell of Erestor's long life, and it will take a while! :)


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