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A Final Farewell
Gwaelinn - 26 Aug 09 - 6:41 PM
Oh wow! How beautifully written. Normally I skip first person writing, but something drew me and I am so glad I read it...such beautiful melencholy, bitter sweet joy.
Nice job!
~G
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curiouswombat - 26 Aug 09 - 10:46 AM
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Jay of Lasgalen - 26 Aug 09 - 12:34 PM
I felt like crying as I wrote this - and I know that at the end, Elladan and Elrohir both knew they'd made a terrible mistake :(
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adoseoftolkienaday - 01 Sep 09 - 6:44 AM
i'd always hope that the twins would either leave or stay together (just like how i prefer the version of Sil where the ambarussa get to middle earth together). still your version makes it all the more poignant and tragic.
love it
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Nieriel Raina - 01 Sep 09 - 10:15 AM
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