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A Final Farewell

Gwaelinn - 26 Aug 09 - 6:41 PM

General Comment

Oh wow!  How beautifully written.  Normally I skip first person writing, but something drew me and I am so glad I read it...such beautiful melencholy, bitter sweet joy.

Nice job!

~G

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A Final Farewell

curiouswombat - 26 Aug 09 - 10:46 AM

Ch. 1: A Final Farewell

Oh Jay - now I want to cry...

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A Final Farewell

Jay of Lasgalen - 26 Aug 09 - 12:34 PM

Ch. 1: A Final Farewell

 I felt like crying as I wrote this - and I know that at the end, Elladan and Elrohir both knew they'd made a terrible mistake :(

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A Final Farewell

adoseoftolkienaday - 01 Sep 09 - 6:44 AM

Ch. 1: A Final Farewell

i'd always hope that the twins would either leave or stay together (just like how i prefer the version of Sil where the ambarussa get to middle earth together). still your version makes it all the more poignant and tragic.

love it 

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A Final Farewell

Nieriel Raina - 01 Sep 09 - 10:15 AM

Ch. 1: A Final Farewell

Oh my goodness, Jay. You made me cry! I also like to think the twins chose to sail together, but also wonder about what if they chose alternate paths. You have managed to show so very well what might have happened, showing both the similarity of the sons of Elrond as well as their differences. Brilliantly done! 

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