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Lie Down in the Darkness, Rise up from the Ash

docmon - 06 Jul 06 - 2:06 PM

Ch. 23: Through the Wastelands

oh, dwim, you've really done it now. Your story feels so true to the original and yet it is totally your own. And after this chapter, well, anything goes, I suppose. It's all up for grabs! I don't know if my heart is strong enough to make it through!

All I can say is, KEEP WRITING!

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Lie Down in the Darkness, Rise up from the Ash

Dwimordene - 07 Jul 06 - 1:45 PM

Ch. 23: Through the Wastelands

after this chapter, well, anything goes, I suppose. It's all up for grabs!

Not quite anything. But hopefully enough to keep things unsettled. :evil

And I promise I am writing.

Cheers,

Dwim

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Lie Down in the Darkness, Rise up from the Ash

thelauderdale - 20 Dec 11 - 9:16 PM

Ch. 23: Through the Wastelands

Loved the detail about Bree vs. Shire measurements.  Frodo may not have gotten a laugh out of Sam's comment, but I did.  I think I should be the one traveling with Samwise: I'd make a good audience for him.

Watching them try to cross the marshes without Gollum = nail-biting experience.  And much as I like Orcs, the ending of this chapter terrified me.

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