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Lie Down in the Darkness, Rise up from the Ash

thelauderdale - 11 Dec 11 - 7:03 PM

Ch. 1: The Arrow of Fate

Picking this up for the MEFAs, and I'm thinking I will comment as I go.  I just came off of Citrine's "Worth," another AU hinging on a certain character's premature death, so it's fair to say that he's not having a good day in Laud-land.

I find it interesting that, as in Aiwendiel's "A Bit of Rope," the moment of divergence from canon becomes a kind of echo in the narrative, recognized by Gandalf.  Something changed, and even though he "cannot see all ends," he knows that somehow it is going to play out differently than it should have.

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