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Threnody for the Dispossessed

Anguirel - 25 Oct 09 - 12:23 PM

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Beautiful! Maglor and Daeron were wonderful in this, and I think they were also very true to their characters.  I enjoyed this immensely!

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Threnody for the Dispossessed

Tindome - 21 Nov 09 - 10:50 AM

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I liked it.

Gentle, nice insight to the characters, and good rhythm.

It is not The Greatest Story Ever but it is good story, well written and emotional, sweet.

Well done.

I still think there is a mistake in 1. chapter: Finrod did not sing before Morgoth, he was competing with Sauron.

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Threnody for the Dispossessed

kenaz - 24 Nov 09 - 1:02 PM

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Thank you for taking the time to read and review! And double-thanks for bringing the canon error to my attention!  I will fix that immediately....

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