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ziggy - 01 Nov 09 - 2:19 AM

Ch. 4: Titles Given

I really just had to pause and tell you how much I am enjoying the story. It is original and lively, has a beautifully balanced narrative tone, between youthful naivety and diplomatic cunning one would expect from any Thranduillion. Your descriptions are superb. The tension you weave is exciting and I have to get onto the next chapter now!

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