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Bee-Elves
Freyalyn - 05 Feb 10 - 1:42 AM
Fascinating, well written and cleverly thought out. The presumption of superiority is frighteningly plausible.
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Tindome - 09 Feb 10 - 10:35 AM
Lovely.
Very different from an usual picture of any elven society, but fun and sweet and friendly.
good story.
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Elena Tiriel - 14 Mar 10 - 9:53 PM
This is very well done, Darth! The arrogance is all too common, but the misunderstandings left me in stitches at times.
Great story!
- Barbara
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ziggy - 26 Jun 10 - 5:00 AM
This is wonderful! Oropher glorious in his delectable and unique style of leadership - charismatic, yes, I should say so. Who would not follow an elf who lies naked sunbathing with a hat on and then strides unselfconsciously back to his people-ish, telling everyone he is not the king, but a reeve. I liked that idea enormously. I have always used Aran to mean chief rather than King but Noldor and Men cannot quite get that distinction.
But this is not only beautifully crafted, but so detailed in the back story. And the Nandor/sindar/noldor cultures so carefully distinct. LOved Canamire and am now going to look for more from you about him!
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