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The Sons of Thunder

Scarlet10 - 03 May 10 - 7:49 AM

Ch. 4: Lust

Thank you for this chapter.

I was worried for a minute that Elrohir will win, but I see I can trust you to keep Legolas' interests above all else.

I do hope there will not be a scene of sex between them. I resent Elrohir too much for it, at the moment.

And I expect some apologies, to Legolas. Seems like Aragorn has made the same mistake as in the council, and accused Legolas...

All in all, I loved this chapter, and this story.

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Imber - 03 May 10 - 1:28 PM

Ch. 4: Lust

I like the intensity of this - elves can't be cool and calm and all-knowing all the time! I'm looking forward to more.

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curiouswombat - 04 May 10 - 3:05 PM

Ch. 4: Lust

Gosh - that is a wonderful fight scene,  and most certainly not one that those who witnessed it would have enjoyed.  Bravo!

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Azalais - 28 Nov 10 - 12:27 AM

Ch. 4: Lust

Oh my goodness, that fight. Thrilling and terrible at the same time - and you manage to bring the two characters out so strongly through it. Legolas ice-cool; defending himself, yet only injuring Elrohir as much as he really has to - and Elrohir enraged. And then Legolas' moment of understanding and almost compassion when he looks into Elrohir's eyes.

I really like the contrast in fighting styles you bring out too, with Legolas turning the fact that he only has knives to his advantage, using their sound and the sunlight glinting off them, and using his speed and agility and ability to just... disappear out from under Elrohir's blade.

Bravo indeed! Can't wait till I have time to read the next chapter - I'm having to ration myself...

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thelauderdale - 07 Jun 11 - 6:29 PM

Ch. 4: Lust

Elves behaving badly.  Someone needs to give Elrond a clout.  Yes, I said Elrond.  500 years since the Redhorn Pass and he couldn't be bothered to get his kid into any kind of therapy?

Fascinating and horrible and sad to see how you have wound up this confusion/grief/lust/anger inside of Elrohir: one tangled knot of neuroses.  I'm not really sure why he is aiming it all at Legolas, though.  But I figure some revelation is forthcoming.  Unless it's all just so much bad timing: War-time stress, the culmination of centuries of frustration, turning something that might otherwise be mild to medium attraction into murderous obsession and a need for dominance.

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