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The Sons of Thunder

curiouswombat - 16 May 10 - 3:02 PM

Ch. 7: The Darkness Within

Oh Elrohir, what a dark path you walk, and in the walking harm yourself as much as others.

And Ziggy, what a complex tale you weave...

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Scarlet10 - 18 May 10 - 10:47 PM

Ch. 7: The Darkness Within

What exactly did happen to Elrohir back around his mother?

The hints take me to a very dark place, which makes me hope that I misunderstand something.

I do hope this will be revealed to us, the readers, and that Elrohir will not harm Legolas.

This last chapter made me shiver.

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Azalais - 30 Nov 10 - 10:48 AM

Ch. 7: The Darkness Within

Darkness, indeed. Elrohir is in a very, very bad way, isn't he?.. - love and hatred and desire and admiration all very badly mixed up.

This is a seriously disturbing chapter, but I know that's what you intended - rest assured the writing was more than powerful enough to have the desired effect!

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thelauderdale - 07 Jun 11 - 7:25 PM

Ch. 7: The Darkness Within

Elrohir is, indeed, acting more than his share of an Orc.

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