HASA Stories

Comments for: The Sons of Thunder

Talk to ziggy

If you are a HASA member, you must login to submit a comment.

We're sorry. Only HASA members may post comments. If you would like to speak with the author, please use the "Email Author" button in the Reader Toolbox. If you would like to join HASA, click here. Membership is free.

2 Comments

 
 

The Sons of Thunder

Imber - 24 May 10 - 7:41 AM

Ch. 8: Aftermath

I'm relieved things between our heroes seem to be improving - I don't think I could take more darkness and angst you showed in the previous chapters. And I like angst.

Go to The Sons of Thunder

The Sons of Thunder

Azalais - 30 Nov 10 - 3:45 PM

Ch. 8: Aftermath

The plot continues to thicken... Still much darkness and pain, and yet the way you write about it is so lyrical. The passages describing the sea, the clouds and the gulls are beautiful.

Top marks too for bringing out the fact, which a lot of fanfic writers seem to get tripped up on, that Pelargir is not on the coast!

And I like the idea that Elrond's sons might know a little of the language of the Dwarves; after all, Elrond was a Dwarf-friend...

Go to The Sons of Thunder

In Stories

Finding Story Comments

Only chapters with comments appear in the drop down list. "General Comments" are free floating and don't belong to a particular chapter.

To leave a comment for a chapter that doesn't appear in the drop-down list, go to that chapter and use the form on the page.

Donation Options

Keyword Search

Search story summaries and titles


Don't use commas. Separate words with spaces.