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The Sons of Thunder

curiouswombat - 22 Aug 11 - 10:46 AM

Ch. 36: Forgiveness

What an excellent chapter.  The understanding now between Elladan and Elrohir; the moment of recognition on Aragorn's part; Legolas coming closer and closer to full recall, and coping with it; that satisfyingly serious conversation between him and Elrohir;  all perfect, I think.

And that final scene with Pippin - priceless.

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Azalais - 23 Aug 11 - 5:28 AM

Ch. 36: Forgiveness

I agree with curiouswombat - what a satisfying chapter. Not the end, but perhaps the beginning of a move towards resolution after so many frustrations and misunderstandings.

And I admire your decision not to throw Legolas and Elrohir at each other in fanfic-cliche fashion, but to have them behave like the centuries-old warriors they are, accepting that "now is not the time".

So much vivid description again, of Aicanaro, of the nighttime sounds of the camp - I love the scene with the three Elves around the campfire and Aragorn observing them, so quietly and astutely, such a Ranger. Great stuff.

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Erulisse - 29 Jan 12 - 6:42 PM

Ch. 36: Forgiveness

I am finally giving myself a treat and allowing myself to catch up on the story.  The best part about being behind is that I can read more than one chapter at a time.  The worst thing is that I was so behind!  Shame on me! 

- Erulisse (one L)

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