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A Powerful Absence

ziggy - 09 Dec 10 - 2:35 PM

Ch. 2: Chapter Two

I really like that it is Gimli who puts his hand on Elladan's shoulder. And that Elrohir is not waiting- it would be too simplistic-and actually, the others who meet him are noted but he is still not really there- still shocked.

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curiouswombat - 09 Dec 10 - 3:00 PM

Ch. 2: Chapter Two

Thank you again.  Yes - for Elrohir to be  waiting would have been too simple, but Elladan had only seen as far as 'And then Elrohir will be there' - his brother's absence is almost the last straw.

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