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Spring Ride

curiouswombat - 07 May 11 - 4:45 AM

Ch. 1: Spring ride

This is a fascinating glimpse into the ride to battle that Merry undertook with 'Dernhelm'.   The sense of isolation he feels, both for himself and his companion is just right, I think.

The moment of hope and recognition of life continuing is lovely - and his companion's reaction, therefore even more... heart-wrenching I think is the word.

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