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The Mandrake Child

Nath - 25 Nov 11 - 10:37 AM

General Comment

Quite the intriguing first few chapters you have here, and I'm curious to see how all this plays out...

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Aiwendiel - 09 Dec 11 - 9:39 AM

General Comment

Wow, this is a very powerful story so far. The prologue had me hooked (what a fabulous last line!) and these first few chapters are really intriguing. Update soon, please!

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Aiwendiel - 25 Jan 12 - 9:22 PM

Ch. 8: Chapter 7

Wonderful chapter -- excellent imagery and writing, full of dark and grief stricken emotion. Seren and Beriadan are so well drawn, the scene of their quiet night talk followed so quickly by the inevitable... beautiful. Can't wait for more. Aiwendiel

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Aiwendiel - 25 Jan 12 - 9:33 PM

Ch. 10: Epilogue

Very nice -- and am anxious for the next story of Seren! Thanks for this treat. Aiwendiel

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