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Safe In Isengard
ziggy - 01 Dec 12 - 10:46 AM
WEll... I don't think either one is 'right' because htey both work, but the second is a really bleak and depressing end- but the tragedy works with the meeting of eyes and bearing witness. And hte first works although the amount of action that is in it means you cant give it the depth or emotional intensity that the second has. Both are a treat to read and that exploration of what if...is fascinating.
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