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The Chronicles of The Kelvar

ziggy - 16 Aug 12 - 12:36 AM

Ch. 5: Coarse-Mannered Ponies and Hole Dwellers

I love this defamilarisation of fields and what we consider to be lovely countryside as being cut up and spoiled- that was a really intersting idea, just what I expect from you! And the fat sluggish little ponies, barely awake- lovely! Shadwofax's voice continues as strong and as arrogant and very young actually, as before. Great idea!

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