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A Mortal Life

Larner - 29 Jul 13 - 10:00 PM

Ch. 4: A Stranger Passing Through

Okay.  Had wondered if such a scene might follow.  But at least Corli and Nod are now protected.

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A Mortal Life

Aiwendiel - 30 Jul 13 - 6:47 AM

Ch. 4: A Stranger Passing Through

Thanks for your comments, Larner, and especially this one... (tries to stifle grin  You little devil!)... I am aware this version of an Istar settling into his mortality will not be to everyone's liking... and I should warn: it gets worse. And better, I hope. Or at least interesting! And so glad you found a silver lining, for yes, they are very much protected now... as long as they stay inside that shimmering blue net, of course...

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