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A Mortal Life

ziggy - 08 Apr 12 - 1:37 AM

Ch. 21: The New Father

I love this quite intimate moment between Schlain and Gandalf - although it doesn't feel rightto call him Gandalf with his short hair and no beard! Love the bit where he says how curious they are about the baby (wont spoil it). I like that you have spent time here on the menfolk and their relationship - and of course, the grief that will come.

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A Mortal Life

Larner - 01 Oct 13 - 9:37 PM

Ch. 21: The New Father

To know that you will outlive your child and all of your descendants as well as your beloved--that would indeed cause grief.  At least he understands well what he's been told by others who know!  Is it Earendil who told him this?  Or Manwe?

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