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Secret Chambers of the Heart

Elrûn - 06 Aug 12 - 11:52 AM

Ch. 5: Fast Friends

Dear Adaneth,

This chapter even benefits from the long months that stretch between its making and the previous instalments - it gives you a realistic feeling of the amount of time during which Saelon and Veylin did not see each other. Their relationship remains enigmatic - even to Veylin himself...


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Secret Chambers of the Heart

Adaneth - 09 Aug 12 - 12:55 PM

Ch. 5: Fast Friends

Thank you for your continuing comments, Elrûn!  This week you can find out what Dírmaen thinks of Veylin's visit.

I'm afraid you'll have to wait an extra week for the following chapter, however.  I'm running off into the Wild, as I do this time of year, but unless the wolves or bears get me, there will be more to read before the end of the month.



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