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Secret Chambers of the Heart

Elrûn - 28 Sep 12 - 12:15 PM

Ch. 11: The Innocence of Our Neighbors

Dear Adaneth,

Having just returned from the wilderness myself, I finally find the time to briefly commment on your latest installments. I find them really riveting, all the more since you rise to the challenge of describing dwarfen matters of the heart. All in all, I would describe your writing with a term coined by the French classics: it is vraisemblable, which is a rare treat indeed. Thank you for it!

Elrûn

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Secret Chambers of the Heart

Adaneth - 28 Sep 12 - 1:12 PM

Ch. 11: The Innocence of Our Neighbors

It is vraisemblable, which is a rare treat indeed.

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Secret Chambers of the Heart

Adaneth - 28 Sep 12 - 1:15 PM

Ch. 11: The Innocence of Our Neighbors

Arg!  Where did the rest of that comment go?

Let's try again.

Thank you, Elrûn!  I'm glad you like the way I've fleshed out Dwarvish culture based on the little Tolkien gave us.  When I started writing these stories, I wasn't sure it would work at this level.  I hope you find the next installment as life-like.

Cheers--

Adaneth

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