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May the Valar Protect Them

docmon - 19 Feb 06 - 10:30 AM

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What a non-stop engaging story! You grab the reader nearly right away and never let go till the end. Your original characters (nearly all in the story) were so well-rounded and real, and the emotions portrayed so well that I was often nearly brought to tears myself. I was stuck reading till 2 in the morning last night because I couldn't put this down! Great job!


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