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More Dangerous, Less Wise

Azalais - 23 Mar 13 - 8:28 AM

Ch. 5: The High Pass

Such an atmospheric and evocative chapter!  I love your writing of the Mountains as malignant characters, the storms, the weather, and Legolas caught in all that.

Lovely moment when he finds the Goblin-gate and Thorin's tinder-box! (I thought "but Gandalf was going to get the Goblin-gate blocked up by a giant...", then decided that was probably what the boulder was doing in the path and it had slipped out of place over the years :-)

Poor Legolas, you've left him in the worst possible state to make a good impression on all those snooty Noldor, cruel author!

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