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Valour without Renown

Bodkin - 04 Nov 06 - 3:12 AM

Ch. 17: Return and Departure

I am so pleased to see Elfled's story come to a happy ending.  I have enjoyed looking at Rohan and it's more noted characters through her eyes - and found the parallels between her pain/healing and Rohan's recovery from warfare to be very - well - encouraging!

 Good stuff.  So did she live happily ever after?  And how did Hereward cope with being in charge at such a young age?  And what was the fate of Wulfram's daughters?  Lots of potential for a sequel here!

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Valour without Renown

Julie - 11 Nov 06 - 5:52 AM

Ch. 17: Return and Departure

Congratulations, good job! I had fun catching up and seeing the rest of the story. So sad for all her sadness, and glad Elfled found happiness. I like how you blended background gapfilling with the personal story. I've seen a lot of Rohan through Elfled's eyes.

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