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The Time of Probing

Aiwendiel - 30 Jul 13 - 6:55 AM

Ch. 9: IX

You have so artfully developed the rather pathetically one dimensional Arwen of the original to a truly full character in this. And yet remain entirely true to canon. I hear the foreshadowing notes of the fate of an unnamed but beloved standard bearer to come, as well. And Sam's alert attention to the details of her needlework is so touching, bringing this noble Elf Princess down to earth for him as he recalls his sister. You capture the taut intensity covering the tightly reined in emotions between A and A, too. "Scrying"... what a great word. All the while keeping Frodo in focus for all... Nicely done!

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