The Week in Comments
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In the Prophet's Tent
DrummerWench - 11 Mar 10 - 9:20 PM
I really liked this! It "humanizes" the orcs, and shows the humans as not much better... Also really appreciated the enigmatic treatment of the seer's vision & the way you let the reader wonder just what she said. Very very nice!
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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan
Cuinwen - 11 Mar 10 - 8:35 PM
LOVE the story. Please keep this comment private. I think HE has revealed a lot and now it is her turn. For example, she knows in her heart she is a girl, but she has boyish tendencies (all-males around her in childhoood), which would be verbotin in Gondor but freely acceptable in Rohan. But she never gives him the chance to tell her that! She is so closed! She should open up a little to her true love, and not just by her actions.
Glowing Embers
Adaneth - 11 Mar 10 - 8:51 AM
My, I read that dark tidbit about Faramir being dismissed, which led me to this, which I like even better. (I had never considered the possibility, but it rings all too true.)
Wonderful stuff!
Cheers--
Adaneth
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Spirit of Fire
TariElfLady - 10 Mar 10 - 10:20 AM
This is so excellent. I don't know what else to say except I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll just have to keep checking this site so I don't miss it.
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Very Model of a Warden of Lothlorien, The
elfscribe - 09 Mar 10 - 2:50 PM
Oh this is priceless, kenaz. Love it.
~elfscribe
Hand to Hand
mffantasia - 09 Mar 10 - 2:22 PM
Adaneth,
So glas that you have posted. I don't have too much time for review (I'm at work) but I wanted to let you know that I'm reading and waiting for your updates.
My, those dwarves are all incredible business men, I would not like to bargain with them, I'm sure that I will lost.
Thank you
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The Princess who was Afraid of Horses
Casso - 08 Mar 10 - 5:32 PM
I very much enjoyed the first two chapters, are there 4 chapters?
Hand to Hand
Adaneth - 08 Mar 10 - 12:30 PM
Thank you for your patience as well as your comments, Elrûn--these latest as well as the ones back in December. (Belated thanks to Tindome and Mffantasia for their kind words as well.)
I know you are probably wondering how Saelon and Dírmaen are doing, so I'll catch you up with them this Friday.
Cheers--
Adaneth
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Hand to Hand
Elrûn - 08 Mar 10 - 6:21 AM
Adaneth,
What a pleasant surprise! I loved to read about the intricacies of dwarvish blood ties as well as the beautiful references to various precious stones. Thank you so much for this new chapter!
Elrûn
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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan
Freyalyn - 05 Mar 10 - 12:35 AM
*Now* she realises what a twit she's been! Love how you're writing this, even if I do want to give this particular Lothiriel a slap.
The Last Hero
Freyalyn - 05 Mar 10 - 12:10 AM
Just what I needed on a achey Friday morning. Lovely - I'm rather glad Tevildo didn't go off with the stuck-up nanny and poor Cameron. I do think that Aaron should do the cat-bathing duties, though. No point in getting two people bitten....
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